The short answer
A ghost story does not arrive in an empty room. The size and habits of its audience can change what a performer tries to achieve before a single supernatural event has been described.
Selected passages and original choices
Make the change visible
The historical example and the new writing plan have different jobs.
| Choice | Selected production choice | Original test |
|---|---|---|
| Aim | Amusement at a large gathering. | State the effect before choosing a delivery. |
| Shared knowledge | A college community and its setting. | Decide which references new listeners can understand. |
| Revision | An occasion shapes a telling. | Keep the event, change the information and pause. |
Chronology
A timeline of the turning points
A new college
The setting for the annual entertainment.
A stated aim
Amusement for a large party.
A story required by an occasion
Davies says the new college needed Christmas entertainment, and he contributed a ghost story. His introduction explains that amusement, rather than terror, suited the large audience.
Massey’s institutional history places the founding in 1963 and identifies Ron Thom’s architecture.
The building is part of the occasion, not merely a backdrop. A performance can give a new community an imagined past by attaching incidents to rooms its listeners already know. That is an interpretation of the stated setting and aim, rather than a claim that the building was actually haunted.
Separate a purpose from a universal rule
He connects terror with a smaller circle of listeners, while describing the college tales as cheerful entertainment.
The useful production distinction is between this performer’s chosen purpose and a law about all audiences. A large crowd can still be frightened; this record explains why he chose another effect. An inside joke may also become less legible when the story travels beyond the original community.
Original task: one premise, two rooms
Invent a cloakroom in which an unclaimed coat acquires a new name tag every evening. Plan one opening for 120 people at a noisy celebratory dinner and another for 8 people gathered quietly after the building has closed. The premise, audience counts and room conditions are ours. Keep the supernatural event the same, but state a different aim and select two delivery choices for each room.
Reference dinner opening: “The coat has attended more annual dinners than the treasurer. It has also paid exactly the same subscription: nothing. Tonight its tag says Chair of Finance.” The fictional listeners need to recognise the office and hear the final phrase. A pause before that phrase gives the joke a clear arrival.
Reference small-room opening: “At closing time the coat had no tag. We locked the room. When we returned, a card hung from its collar. It carried the name of the person holding the only key.” Here a short sequence establishes access and a contradiction, with less dependence on shared institutional jokes.
Test the delivery, then revise
The dinner version makes an imaginary office a comic target; the quiet version narrows attention to who could enter the room. Neither is guaranteed to work. Read each to another person without explaining the intended effect first, then ask which detail carried the ending and which required missing background.
If the dinner listener cannot identify the treasurer’s role, replace the reference with a visible action instead of adding a lecture. If the quiet version creates confusion about the key, clarify possession before adding further mystery. These are revisions of information and delivery, not imitations of a Davies story.
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The wider writing life
1913–1995
Robertson Davies
Novelist, editor and performerA novelist and performer who became Massey College’s founding head.Read biographyQuick answers
Common questions
- Are these coat scenes from High Spirits?
- No. Both are original examples, and no historical story or performance is reproduced.
Primary and institutional sources
How this history was checked
The selected passages below ground this study. The exercises and reference responses are original. This article was reviewed on 31 October 2026.
