Writing and performance

1995 interview; original planning task

Alistair MacLeod: An Ending Before a Draft Is Finished

Compare composition order with a reader’s sequence, then test two original endings against the clues an unfinished story would need to prepare.

An original story plan places the ending in the composition sequence before revision, while preserving a separate beginning–middle–ending reading order.
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Different orderings: composing and encountering the story

The short answer

Knowing a destination need not mean writing the journey in order. MacLeod’s account of a draft gives us a precise occasion to separate the order of making from the order in which a reader encounters the result.

Selected passages and original choices

Make the change visible

The historical example and the new writing plan have different jobs.

Original comparison; no protected page, illustration or performance reproduced.
ChoiceComposition planReader’s possible sequence
MidpointA destination can be drafted now.The ending need not appear here.
ReturnComplete and revise earlier material.Preparations must work on a first reading.
AlternativeChanging the ending changes the route.Clues should permit more than hindsight.

Chronology

A timeline of the turning points

  1. Interview publication

    A working method described to Kruk.

  2. Separate publishing record

    No Great Mischief appeared.

A reported working method

MacLeod tells Kruk that he often writes a concluding paragraph or line when about halfway through a story. It supplies a destination for what remains to be written.

The statement concerns composition. It does not mean that a reader should encounter the ending halfway through the finished work. Nor does a destination determine every route: revision can change the significance of what looked like a necessary earlier event.

Sources for this section: [1] · [2]

A different kind of pressure

The later publishing history of No Great Mischief includes Douglas Gibson’s repeated encouragement to finish a long-running manuscript.

A self-chosen ending and an external request for completion are different pressures. One gives a narrative direction; the other asks for deliverable work. The records do not show that one explains every delay or that the 1999 novel followed exactly the method described for stories.

Sources for this section: [1] · [2]

Original task: prepare either ending

Invent an unfinished story about a volunteer who writes programmes for a neighbourhood theatre but is never named in them. At the midpoint, draft this ending: “For the first time, the announcement used her name.” List three earlier details that could prepare it without making the final announcement a foregone conclusion. Then replace the destination with “She tore her name out of the programme.” Which preparations now need to change? These sentences and events are ours.

Reference route to the first ending: show her quietly correcting a list; let another volunteer notice the correction; establish that acknowledgments can be amended before the performance. None guarantees public recognition. For the second ending, retain the list but add an unwanted public credit or disagreement about the work. The same printed name can then become something she rejects rather than desires.

Sources for this section: [1] · [2]

Reference answer: distinguish two sequences

One composition plan is: draft a beginning and part of the middle; write the destination; return to complete and revise the middle. The reader may still receive beginning, middle and ending in that order. The two orderings answer different questions.

Do not add a prophecy that announces the exact final action. Test whether each preparatory detail also makes sense before the ending is known. If every detail only points mechanically to the last sentence, revise for competing possibilities. This is an original planning exercise, not an account of an uninspected MacLeod manuscript.

Sources for this section: [1] · [2]

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Quick answers

Common questions

Does this show how No Great Mischief was drafted?
No. The exercise uses an attributed story-writing method and original invented material, not the novel’s uninspected drafts.

Primary and institutional sources

How this history was checked

The selected passages below ground this study. The exercises and reference responses are original. This article was reviewed on 31 October 2026.

  1. Laurie Kruk / Studies in Canadian Literature 20.1,1995Alistair MacLeod: The World is Full of Exiles
  2. Margalit Fox / New York Times, reprinted in UWindsor View,Fall 2014,pp 30–31A Novelist in No Hurry